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Guardians of my Soul....

My heart is bleeding in so many places, so many times i have been hurt. You act like you dont care, you gaurdians of my soul. Your words sting and prick my skin, that which i have learned to ignore. Cant you see what i feel?    Like an angel, you lie there sleeping forever, in your bed of isolation... Not hearing a word i say, selfishly you lie there, immobile with your self pity.

 But you have teached me not to feel and so i mirror what i see. To bury the razors in my skin, to let it out without a scream...


Posted on 10/16/2006 10:58 AM Visits: 40
emotoni: 10/20/2006 6:09 PM
For the people who cant figure this one out.... its about my parents..... mostly about my mum....
666haterofyou666: 10/30/2006 9:31 PM
wow this is deep, very good, and sad :( but ur heaps talented :)
gablovemcr: 12/12/2006 4:22 PM
Shit ... its really good and ... deep i really like it !
munchiegoodnesxo: 12/14/2006 10:43 AM
holy shiz..thats beautiful, in a sad way.. but stilll really really good.. u have talent, u should write songs and start a band.. ude totally kik ass.. :)
xhatedbylifex: 12/31/2006 8:31 PM
Wow! That's really good!
XCaseyXChaosX: 01/06/2007 7:48 PM
i can relate to that me and my parents don't get along at all i know what your going through
venomedkiss: 02/05/2007 1:46 PM
I'm so sorry for you. I mean I feel your pain. I know how it feels to have been through so much killing emotional pain, that you become cold. And you don't feel like feeling anything anymore. I keep all my shit inside too, and it fucking hurts, but no one hears. It's like this I guess. Just, please, don't go in the deep end. You know, humongous amounts of tears are needed to get those few but worthy smiles. After the rain comes the sunshine. I hope you feel better and wish you all the best.
emotoni: 02/06/2007 7:13 AM
hmm. yeah.. i wrote it a long time ago.. but i guess it kinda relates to how i feel now too... i guess these feelings will haunt me forever..=(
screamox3: 02/09/2007 8:16 AM
I also have probs with my parents, it's like they can't get us or don't understand us, sometimes I hope it will get better, but is doesn't anyway sometimes I feel like running away of them, but I have nowhere to go.What you wrote there is deep but so beautiful..

~xx
AmY
XxMigdy.MassacrexX: 02/26/2007 1:43 PM
I know how it feels to be hurt, I understand you're pain, basically, my life sucks!! my mom hates the hell out of me, and my dad is one careless son of a gun, my heart has been broken too many times, and I'm really sorry you have to go thru this. Love is a weapon of mass distruction, but sadly we can't do anything about it but to wait alone for death to take us to it's dark but calm heaven. much love. bye
lostinsideofme: 02/27/2007 3:05 AM
im sorry
hottt: 03/29/2007 5:32 PM
i just have to say that was really strong.......sounds sad!!!!!!! sorry u feel the way u do :(......ur a great writer i have to say.......its true
angelicagarcia14: 04/05/2007 7:22 AM
That's a really nice poet. well can we like chat later or something?Damn my mom she doesent trust me even though i havent done anything or lied to her and my stupit dad well same they cut my cellphone
i can't see my bestfriend wich is stupit hes a dumbass now arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh nobody understands me
when i tell my mom something for her to help le she starts argueing with me instead of listening.My stupit friends ignore me my life is sooo fucking messed up!!! I fell ignored left out and unloved well ttyl
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